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[修真仙侠] 【异仙】(11)璃月神女,紫府,奸淫睡梦中的阿姨和外祖母

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作者写的很棒了,没必要道歉,毕竟构思这玩意也不是那么好说清楚的,其实整体的框架有就行,围绕作者剧情清楚就行,其余的可以在无关紧要的时候交代交代,就目前的来看,作者一直在血亲里下手,当然上一章也引出了新的人物,我觉得作者可以在新的人物里,让新的人物的性格相对的贞烈点,就是夫妻关系很好,但被男主强行得手,然后在男主半威胁半强迫中逐渐堕落,最后自己亲手送上女儿之类的,我觉得会挺有意思的,也不会审美疲劳啊
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